June 23, 2007

Some Said I

And some said I
would be the one to forgive.
Some said I,
And some said I.

I had a point and a haunting.
Some sins are worth it.

If you listen
listen closely
If you stop speaking,
and you just listen,
The Earth tells you what to write.
It's there all the time.

But one latent whisper went unheard. Some said I,
and some said I.
He asked, Why aren't you listening. Why aren't you speaking.
Did you forget to remember?


I listened with too many ears.
And I am afraid of most people.

I don't know if these moments are forgiven.
But I know this:
All Words are redemption.

All our
Words
are our
redemption.

Can anyone be forgiven
for what they take and what they leave behind.
For what they know and what they've forgotten.
For what they say.
Signals and love.
Never again.
Can I be forgiven?
Can I tell your story?
I asked,
Can I see in the dark?

If you write the book, she said.
If you write the book.

Stories are researched.
Life is scripted.
Every script has a star.
Every book, an author.
Some said I.
And some said I.

"And now I understand
How much I took from you"
-Stephen Trask


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10 comments:

Bob said...

Love, love, LOVE the music - excellent choice. It expresses something like what JK Rowling would say if she could write grown-up books.

Love the post too. I internalized it too much to make any intelligent analysis of it, which I hope is as much a compliment to you as it is a sneer at my id.

Veronica said...

It is, Bob.
Thank you very much.

dr. dave said...

so... how much do you charge for those ghost-written lyrics, anyway?

vinny said...

Script me.

Veronica said...

Ghostwriting prices vary depending on how fast, how good, how long, how much you give me to work with, how much time it takes...

Vinny,
I have.

desiree said...

This is exactly what I needed to read. Thank you so much.

Janet said...

The music was good, but I feel that this is one of the rare instances where the words were the melody and the notes were complimentary. This was so, so good. I'm so I've been AWOL lately, but I always come back. Your words are impossible to forget.

Veronica said...

Hmm...

Lots of emails and comments that I think need a little explanation.

The music you're hearing if you pull up the blog from its main page, is playing from the 6/7/07 post "No Judgements, Ever" and the credit for it goes to www.recon.com where that video clip ad is from. If you scroll down the main page of the blog to that entry, you can see the video clip, which belongs to Recon, and I had nothing to do with, I just wanted to share it.

The lyrics I quoted at the beginning of "Some Said I" are from the movie "Hedwig and the Angry Inch", and are written by the fabulous Stephen Trask.

The post itself, I wrote. I wrote it for myself.
It has nothing to do with Stephen Trask, and it has nothing to do with the Recon music. I'm not taking any credit for Recon's ad or music, nor am I taking any credit for Trask's lyrics. I just shared them, and I credited both appropriately.

The post itself, is all that is mine. And some said I.

I hope this clears any confusions.

Anonymous said...

I love your Words, Veronica.
Better than the song quote, and better than the music from Recon.
I also like how when you quote anyone you always say who it is.

Anonymous said...

thanks for the explanation. I knew what part was "you" - gosh I guess I've been reading your blog quite a lot - well its damn deep.